New H/W ~The Right to Privacy~

[moustache_wax]

Title: The Right to Privacy
Author: moustache_wax from The Bachelors of Baker Street
Pairing: Holmes/Watson
Rating: NC-17 / Grown-ups only!
Summary: Excerpts from Watson’s Journal
Thanks: Beta-love to k_haldane . All remaining flubs are my doing.
Warnings: None. Unless hot, Victorian man-on-man action offends you, in which case you have been duly warned.

Comments

[ich_weiss_nie]

“Yes, the blade is definitely covered in red liquid. Perhaps it’s paint or a serum of some kind.”

Hehe! I love everything about this story, but that line is especially great. Thank you for sharing!

[moustache_wax]

Thanks for reading it. I'm glad you liked sarcastic!holmes ;)

[killalla]

More hot Victorian man-on-man action, yay! The touches of humor were perhaps the best part of this fic, and I must agree with the poster above that the conversation between oblivious!Watson and annoyed!Holmes was classic, especially the line: “Yes, the blade is definitely covered in red liquid. Perhaps it’s paint or a serum of some kind.”

[jianna]

I'm beginning to think that hot Victorian man-on-man action is my favorite kind of hot man-on-man action, especially when it's as well written as this xD

I loved Holmes pulling Watson's entire chair to him. It was like a mini, sexier version of him straightening the fire poker - he doesn't seem like he'd be able to, but then he does it out of nowhere. Very well done!

[moustache_wax]

Ooh, the fire poker! I forgot about that. That *was* hot. ::sigh::

Thanks so much for reading! And big thanks for the screen cap/icon thing that I used to make one of my icons (on this story and this reply.) I usually make my own caps, but you posted some beauties at cox_and_co! Yay, you.

I think your sexy Watson icon would have approved of this story ;)

[jianna]

Thank you and your welcome! I'm glad they were useful :D

And oh I definitely think he does.

[deepforestowl]

squee! You right such lovely slash! Just what I needed after a long day! Thank you!

[moustache_wax]

I love getting a "squee!" Thanks for taking the time to read this story :)

[piscaria]

Though I may call myself a man of words, they are simply lost to me now.

I loved that line! This was a great story. I loved Watson's anger, and Holmes' reasonable explanation. And all of the little tricks Holmes played on Strakes . .. wonderful!

[moustache_wax]

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it. (Pretty-pretty icon, btw.)

[lookfar]

Ooo, I liked the trunk, the diaries, the tension and very much Holmes' outflanking manouevers.

Loved the idea of Holmes wanting to make margin notes. Maybe it's just that I don't care to mix candy and coitus (though I like both), but you lost me at the treacle. I just don't find it plausible that the first time between these two would involve anything so gussied up. Wouldn't they just, you know, Go At It?

Apart from the treacle, I enjoyed this a lot.

[moustache_wax]

Candy & coitus, now there's a subtitle! hehe

I'm glad you enjoyed it, or at least most of it. I did have fun writing it. As for the c&c, more often than not I'm sure they would just go at it, but I do want to mix it up from time to time.

Of course, I'm from the school of thought that says "everything worth trying is worth trying with chocolate." Watson got a little of my sweet tooth here. Writer's bias, and all that... ;^)

Thanks for reading and big thanks for the feedback.

[pinglederry]

everything worth trying is worth trying with chocolate

*cheers*

Lovely little fic you've got here. ^,^

[moustache_wax]

Mmm...chocolate. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!