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[mouthofbrass]

I've been writing more of this story about embalming that I started 6716845 weeks ago. Would anyone mind reading what I have so far? I'm worried that I'm using too much jargon and going into too much detail about stuff people who aren't embalmers either wouldn't get or wouldn't care about, and not talking about the characters enough. I'd really

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[mouthofbrass]

That would be wonderful, my dear. It's not finished yet, but I got to where I am now and went "Uuuuuh. I have no idea if this will make sense or be entertaining to anyone ever. 8|;;;" I will probably work on another story in the meantime.

[sonicnomiko]

I'll read it! I just need some time to if you're willing to wait. XD! ^___^