[Scanlation] Hop! Step! Back! (revised)

[sobdasha]

I've translated this comic before, but in the interim of slowly making my way through projects I've learned a lot--enough to look back at this and realize a new and improved translation was necessary. And now it's finally finished!

Speaking of mistakes: it looks like the circle/artist goes by SUNSON/neco. Pondeco is just the name of the website, I think. Sorry for any confusion!



Title: Hop! Step! Back!
Artist: (pondeco) SUNSON/neco
Scanner: haircurl
Pages: 20
Characters: S. Italy, Spain, France
Pairings: No romance, but the focus is on the Spain-Romano dynamic, so.
Rating: PG-13 (for language)
Warnings: Spain making a few unwise, pedo-sounding comments
Summary: Three stories: France tries to win Romano over; Spain gets Romano new clothes and misunderstandings ensue; Spain is going out for the night and orders Romano to clean house before he gets back--or face drunken Boss's wrath!

So: new revised version!
- I corrected some misunderstandings and mistakes, so this translation should be closer to the artist's original intent
- Sound effects have now been annotated with translations
- I think I ended up tweaking most of the lines to some degree for better flow/more natural sound/to be consistent with the style I want
- I attempted to make the font size as consistent as the quirks of my art program will allow
- Plus the file includes a bonus one-page Spain-and-Romano comic I found posted on the artist's website! Chibi chibi

zip at Mediafire
zip at Filesend

Please let me know if there are any problems.

Thank you all for kindly sticking with me for so long~!