[Fanfic] The Kid: Chapter 17/24

May 29, 2011 08:43

Title: The Kid 
Author/Artist: MoyaKite
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Mainly Prussia and Freddy (little kid!OC), but almost everyone could end up in here eventually. (In this chapter: Freddy, Prussia, Switzerland, Romano, and many others.)
Rating: G (May approach PG-13 in future chapters)
Warnings: Fluff, discussions of mortality, potential for ( Read more... )

c: switzerland, c: oc, c: romano, c: ensemble, chapterfic: the kid, c: prussia, fandom: hetalia

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kuriixcurry May 29 2011, 22:29:30 UTC
Freddy's going to school. He's so grown up now ~
I don't know why, I feel like an old lady right now.

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moyakite May 30 2011, 15:36:37 UTC
I know! I like watching him grow up, but it's always a sad thing to think about...

...I can't say anything about the ending, but I hope that you don't mind that it keeps getting darker like that in future chapters. I'm kind of nervous...

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kuriixcurry June 1 2011, 22:26:39 UTC
Yeah, seeing kiddos growing up is cute & sad at the same time ... *looks at her nieces*

Oh, you don't have to worry ! It's really interesting to see how that fic is evolving, especially when it turns darker, considering how it was fluffy in the beginning ~
Somewhat, I don't want that fic to end, but I also wanna know the end right now, duh ... 8D

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moyakite June 6 2011, 15:40:31 UTC
I'm the oldest of four siblings; one is two years younger than I am, one is seven years younger, and one is nine years younger. It's so hard to believe that the littlest is almost a teenager...!

So, yeah. It's been adorable to watch him grow, but they just grow so fast... The one that's eight years younger is my height already. So I can't help but think about them.

Oh, it's always been fluffy, but this undertone was always there, I think. I'm trying to make all of this gradual... I hope it's working!

Well, I know the ending. Once I finish typing up the rest of the chapters (not many left!), readers can decide if they want them faster.

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sweden_chan May 30 2011, 08:52:41 UTC
Oh, school!! He's growing up <3 Being so nervous, it's so cute >w< And Vash, yay!

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moyakite May 30 2011, 15:34:46 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it! Thank you for commenting!

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esonador May 30 2011, 10:37:54 UTC
Vash was awesome, I like him :3
And I love your Romano,you know that,right? :)
It's really cute that he is nervous :D Coz when I was little,I wasn't nervous :)

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moyakite May 30 2011, 15:34:14 UTC
I've never written Switzerland before, so I was nervous about including him, but I thought that Switzerland would be a good choice for an international school. (My little sister is going to college in Switzerland.)

You weren't? Hahaha, in the US (or at least in my part of it), it's a common to see little kids clinging to their parents' legs on their first day of school, refusing to let go. Freddy's got a few different worries, and he has a bit more dignity, but he's still a kid...

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esonador May 30 2011, 16:37:26 UTC
I'm glad you included him :)

Hm,maybe today yes,but it wasn't common when I was little. Maybe it is because of my family, we were poor, so everyone had to go to the work and I weren't with them all the time. Not that they didn't saw me at all :D But I was used to be without my mother and don't worry and taking care about myself :)
And I remember that when I was 1st day in school,my schoolmate looked like she is ready to cry and her mother told her:"You don't have to cry! Or kids will be laughing at you!" Poor child. -.-

But he is still cute :)

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moyakite June 6 2011, 15:45:20 UTC
I think that I'm glad that I did, too.

Hmm, I see. Freddy has a full-time dad, though. He's so lucky... I think I was excited to be a "big girl" and finally start school. (I actually started preschool at age three or four, so I was rather young...)

Poor kid. Kids can't help it when they cry, I think--it just swells up and overwhelms them if they don't have an outlet.

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