[Fanfic] The Kid: Chapter 19/24

[moyakite]

Title: The Kid 
Author/Artist: MoyaKite
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Mainly Prussia, Canada, Romano, and Freddy (little kid!OC), but almost everyone could end up in here eventually. (In this chapter: Freddy, Prussia, Canada, and Switzerland.) Also, Canada and Prussia are now sort of an item.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Cuteness, sappiness, angst, and

Comments

[taylorphantom]

I've been following this fic now for about ten chapters, and I am now going to kick myself into leaving a comment. Hopfully I can get something out other than incoherant wibbling ;__;

This is just a lovely fic on so many levels. The characters, the relaionships and the themes all feel so right. Prussia, oh dear Prussia ;A; I just want to hold him until everything gets better but it won't and guh. Canada's last line in the chapter... I'm not crying, it's just raining on my face QAQ

(Though I am amused by Switzy in this chapter. Oh he's going to need brain bleach yes?)

I love this fic <3

[moyakite]

Thank you for commenting! (I really love long comments like yours. <3)

Well, I just posted the last chapter... I hope that you like it.

I'm glad that you think I got the relationships right! I was worried about that. Especially since they're countries, you know? I worry.

Anyway. I'm sorry if I made you cry it rain on your face. (At least Switzerland was there! I loved writing him.)

Thank you so much for your support!

[sweden_chan]

I ALMOST cried when I finished QAQ Gilbert!! ;w; But oh how cute it is.

I loved the comment about Canada being Frances brother. Best ever XD And Freddie and Alexandra's little talk about cooties. So cute >W

[moyakite]

Thank you for commenting!

I'm sorry if I almost made you cry...? I don't really know how to respond when people say that. I'm honored? I wondered what the right phrase is...

I'm really glad that you enjoyed this chapter, and I hope you enjoy the last one!

[emmones]

Oh goddammit but you write amazing well

I have to admit but I started sniffling midway especially at Mattie's last line oh gosh.

Can't wait til the next installment (:

[moyakite]

Thank you for your lovely comment! You kind of made me blush. >///< I really hope that you enjoy the end (which I just posted) as much as you enjoyed this! Now that it's ending, I'm particularly nervous about how everyone will react, even though I wrote it, oh, a month and a half ago?

Anyway, I genuinely appreciate your comment. Thank you for taking the time to write it.

[kuriixcurry]

O-Oh God, I almost cried too at Canada's last line ! ;A;"
And the talk between him & Prussia too ... It's really hard to see Gilbert being more and more weak ... I also want him to have fun like before, like when he was with Francis & Antonio. I wish he'll be even more happy with Matthew from now on ~
& Freddy and Alexandra are really cute. ♥

I wonder what the bonus chapters would be about ? :3

[moyakite]

I'm sorry that I seem to be making everyone cry...! I really hope that everyone likes the ending...

Anyway, the bonus chapters (if I had the time to write them...) would be scenes with Prussia getting frustrated and fighting his body, or Freddy collecting wedding vows and stuff, or Canada taking care of Freddy while Prussia sleeps, or Romano having some hard conversations with Veneciano... I had a whole lot of ideas. It would really depend on what people wanted to see.

[kuriixcurry]

The ending was awesome, don't worry, duuh ! ;3;)9

All of those ideas are nice ! I especially would like to see the Romano & Veneciano one. I don't know why, I love seeing Veneciano being all serious ... owo'
Also, will you write something about Freddy's future ? It would really be interesting ! :3

[moyakite]

Aww, thanks. >///<

I think I'll add a journal entry that people can comment on with requests, so be on the lookout for it! I can't make any promises, but if I feel inspired, maybe...?

I don't want to get anyone's hopes up, though...