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[Fanfic] The Kid: Chapter 23/24

Jul 09, 2011 08:12

Title: The Kid
Author/Artist: MoyaKite
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Mainly Prussia, Canada, Romano, and Freddy (little kid!OC), buta lot of characters turn up. (In this chapter: Freddy, Prussia, Canada.) Also, Canada and Prussia are now sort of an item.
Rating: PG-13 (just to be safe)
Warnings: Allusions to serious illness; some cuteness, but with ( Read more... )

c: oc, c: canada, type: fanfiction, chapterfic: the kid, c: prussia

Comments 12

sweden_chan July 10 2011, 00:20:11 UTC

Cute, and sad ;^; I LOVE IT!!

moyakite July 15 2011, 22:02:59 UTC

Thank you! I really do hope that you like the ending...

panda3035 July 10 2011, 07:33:24 UTC

the ending is... going to be heartbreaking in many ways

moyakite July 15 2011, 22:03:25 UTC

Well, the ending is up now--I hope that you enjoy it. Thank you for your comment!

emmones July 10 2011, 12:12:32 UTC

I am both looking forward and dreading the next one, but amazing chapter as always!

moyakite July 15 2011, 22:04:23 UTC

I know that feeling all too well. I hope that I wrote an ending that everyone will like!

Thank you so much for all of your comments and support throughout this fic.

seileach67 July 10 2011, 12:46:50 UTC

I was glad to see this latest chapter but a little sad that this is almost over. Prussia is one of my favorite characters and I'm going to be sorry to see him finally go after hanging on so long, but you do a really good job with him and the relations between the characters feel really realistic. (And props to you for a non-Stuish OC, LOL!) Great job all around.

moyakite July 15 2011, 22:06:25 UTC

Yes... It's over; the final chapter is now up. I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for taking the time to comment; I genuinely appreciate it, and I'm really pleased (and somehow flustered/embarrassed) to hear that you thought my characterization and portrayal of the characters' relationship were realistic. Also, it's good to hear that Freddy isn't a Marty-Stu in your book!

kuriixcurry July 10 2011, 22:31:47 UTC

Eh ?! Next chapter is already the last one ?! I feel kinda sad, but I'm also waiting for this ... ;w;
And it hurts more and more to see Prussia like that ... I think that last chapter will be heartbreaking. ;A;"
But it would be rather interesting to see Freddy's life years after Prussia's death ... Oh, and maybe before he was found too, we still don't really know what happened to him. owwo

Also, good luck with all your work ! And don't rush yourself ~

moyakite July 15 2011, 22:09:15 UTC

Thank you for the comment AND the well wishes! I wrote all of these chapters a month and a half ago, so releasing them isn't a hassle, but I've been busy as all heck. Haha.

I do still wish that I'd had a chance to include certain scenes in the fic, but I had to draw the line somewhere...

Anyway! I really hope that you enjoy the finale! I know I've said that a million times, but I'm so nervous about what people are going to think that I just can't help myself... I put a lot of thought into the ending, and I wrote what felt right to me, but I worry about what it'll be like for all of the readers... I guess we'll see.