FIC; The Universe Encompasses and Swallows Me Up Like an Atom

[mozarts_piano]

title: the universe encompasses and swallows me up like an atom
author: mozarts-piano
pairings: louis/harry (mentions of liam/zayn, niall/ofc, matt cardle/aiden grimshaw)
word count: 5,000
rating: Mature
warnings: swearing, sexual activities (not too graphic), a very low knowledge of space and planets
summary: harry and louis go on an intergalactic road trip

Comments

[aboutademongirl]

oh my goddddd. i can't breathe. the little prince is probably one of my favourite things ever, and oui, les étoiles, ça me fait toujours rire, and i can't! this is gorgeous. so charming!

also, i totally recognise you. you're the one who wrote that lovely harry proposes on the second date fill at the km. that was so great.

[say_thanks]

i totally want a link to that!

[mozarts_piano]

oh, wow, thank you - Harry proposes on the second date

[mozarts_piano]

thank you so much :) I'm also ridiculously in love with le petit prince (but although i took 6 years of mandatory french in school, i can barely speak a word, so i've got an english copy)

yes that was me! :D I'm so glad you liked it.

thank you again, oh you're so nice!

[peri_s]

i am just

FLAILING

that was the loveliest most innocent thing i have ever read. just everything was so sweet and dreamy and gorgeous, and that part where they don't understand why the earth people didn't like them, it almost broke my heart.

thank you for this, it was beautiful.

[mozarts_piano]

i read this last night before i went to bed and it just - you made my day, you did :)

thank you so much for the lovely words! and yes, it was rather fun to write that everywhere they went they met lovely people, except on earth ;)

nonono, thank you darling, so much!

[peri_s]

aha you're very welcome! you deserve all the lovely words :)

[torismiles47]

I can't really explain how much I love this bit I'll try, I think it's because it's just so beautiful, the concept and the writing. Fantastic work!

[mozarts_piano]

oh, thank you so much, love :D

[mowglimoonshado]

This is so dreamy and lovely, definitelu a feel good read. I'm thoroughly charmed!

[mozarts_piano]

aw, thank you so much :) I am pleased to have charmed you!

[amorinventado]

OMFG THIS KSDLAJDLKAJDIOJEWRJKLSJFSKLAJFLKSDJF I CAN'T.
I'm anon!OP and I've basically created this account just so I could comment here. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW, YOU HAVE NO IDEA, I'm so, so grateful someone's taken up my prompt, especially when you've made such a beautiful job. You've created a fantastic 'verse, it's so much more than I ever hoped for. It's just the right amount of cute, sweet and hot, also, the fact that you've included the whole band + ed + matt and aiden makes it all the more awesome. I'd like to quote this bit from the beginning: " "we love each other right?" "always." "so we'll never get lost" " SO. ADORABLE. That's all I'm gonna quote, though, becuase the best thing about your writing aren't the words, but the images you build with it. I love it that I can picture their little asteroid and their garden and the food and the stars perfectly. My favorite one was, predictably, the ending, because the picture of those two standing under the umbrella with the diamonds falling all around them while they just

[mozarts_piano]

I am SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT AHHH thank you so much for the lovely words, honestly, i think i could fry an egg on my cheeks, they're that blushy :)

I adore you just for putting in that prompt, so honestly thanks and awwww, quoting me back, that's so nice :)
I actually have made it almost mandatory to have matt&aiden mentioned in like, everything i write now because i love them that much :D they're precious.

I'm so happy you liked the diamond rain bit, I was a bit nervous at that bit! because it was the original prompt and by the time i got to writing it, i'd been writing for like, 3 hours straight and i was like "no, we can do this, come on brain" so yes, i'm glad you liked it :)

thankyouthankyouthankyou *eats cupcake* thankyouthankyou, thank you for the kind words!!

[unlikely that i will write anything more, but if i do, i will be sure to let you know (oooh like a how they met (no stop i have enough to write brain, haaha))]