fic; (modern art is a) disaster area

Apr 07, 2013 23:22

title: (modern art is a) disaster area
author: mozarts-piano
pairings: louis tomlinson/nick grimshaw
word count: 4,900
rating: pg-14
disclaimer: i don't own one direction or nick grimshaw.
warnings: swearing, a lack of knowledge about london police/street art
summary: an au where louis is a street artist who started off as just a tagger, and tired, over- ( Read more... )

(you are my) sunshine, louis tomlinson/nick grimshaw, the original hipster, fic

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mozarts_piano April 9 2013, 22:41:10 UTC
thank you so much :) :)

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hideupabove April 8 2013, 06:17:03 UTC
this is amazing. actually amazing. the imagery is just ughhhhhh so good

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mozarts_piano April 9 2013, 22:41:29 UTC
gaaah thank you so much :D

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iheartvmars07 April 8 2013, 06:38:57 UTC
(✿ ♥‿♥)
I love their dynamic so much... so very lovely!

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mozarts_piano April 9 2013, 22:41:36 UTC
thank you!!! :D

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badjujuboo April 8 2013, 10:37:38 UTC
i LOVE your words. LOVE.

this really rang out for me too,

harry paints on canvases with oil, making them stain, making them his.

zayn paints on skin, daring people to forget him, his name or his talent.

but louis - louis paints on walls and street corners, curbs and things. he likes bright things, things that might make someone's day a little better, that might make them stop, that might make them wonder who? why? why here why now why why why.

beautiful stuff love!

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mozarts_piano April 9 2013, 22:45:07 UTC
i love this comment, LOVE :D

thank you so so much!!

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soundingawkward April 8 2013, 11:43:29 UTC
hi i'm the prompter/ficathon mod/whatever you want to call me, and firstly, i just want to thank you for writing this. i was in the city, after uni when the idea came to me and the idea has been bouncing around in my head, and it's like you're in there as well, finding all the imagery and the thoughts and putting them down for me.

(i think i wanted to write this a bit myself, but these are all the words that i wanted to say and i thank you for them)

take in the smudged freckles on his face and the tired, colourful eyes.
a+ for referencing freckles, i love nick's freckles so very much, all boyish and lovely and the simple way you refer to his eyes is perfect.

the cop with the phone, the cop with the smile, the cop with the eyes that he wants to know more about.
i am a terrible repeater of words, repeater of phrases like this and this sentence just speaks to me, it's, i'm really lost for words right now - so excuse my bumbling, i've not had a good day - it feels like i'm a part of this?

and when he gets to the exit nick's ( ... )

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mozarts_piano April 9 2013, 22:53:35 UTC
i'm really glad you liked it! :D when i read the prompt it bounced around my head too just like that and i am so happy that you enjoyed

(nick's freckles are my reason for existing sometimes
you are definitely apart of this if you feel like you are, i like my words breathing and hugging darling :D
little louis and big nick are my faaaavourite
you're the best
the best)

thank you darling ♥♥

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