Running like essential red

[mr_barrel]

So, this is my attempt at song writing. I will have to take theory next year, so I won't have to depend on people to help me with this sort of thing.

It is tentatively titled "Safer Nation"

Comments

[pink_stripes14]

the lyrics are good but i really need to hear it sung...but if you sing it for me then i can tell you

[big_bird_luvs_u]

I think the lyrics are great, but sing it to me!

[mr_barrel]

Thats the thing, I don't know how to sing it. I haven't figured out what it should sound like.

[forbiddendance]

zach i love it...i actully herd the song for it & the singing...love it!!!!!