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Feb 03, 2005 22:32

Beauty of a rose,
A refreshing gust of wind,
As tall as the sky.

The greatest torture.
If you can smell the best food,
But never taste it.

Just three feet away,
Further than the farthest star,
I wish I could speak.

...sorry me being overly sappy, 17 syllables at a time

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bouchart February 4 2005, 04:33:27 UTC
Horrible haikus.
You are a world-class loser.
Much like John Kerry.

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bouchart February 7 2005, 03:58:05 UTC
Ken is a loser.
Much like these two democrats:
Kerry and Al Gore.

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bouchart February 8 2005, 03:37:43 UTC
I am the Fat Man.
Consuming, devouring.
My name is Jon Borst.

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mr_chapel0203 February 8 2005, 05:17:37 UTC
You taint my use of natural beauty and imagery as a symbol of human beauty (refering to a very specific human ^_^) and my own frustration (I'm so emo, I don't like food anymore) with your politics. Don't you have a live journal of your own?

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bouchart February 8 2005, 07:41:16 UTC
I've got an LJ.
But I'd rather bash you here.
Cuz I'm cruel that way.

You know more people.
Larger audience, so more
Read my harsh, vile jibes.

Politics- that is
what my LJ is about.
Here, I lampoon you.

My comments always
are rife with sarcastic wit.
Nature: for losers.

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