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[mr_corner_n_me]

Suggestions, helpful advice, all that jazz would be appreciated. Mean comments that don't have anything useful to say only encourage Ragnarok. D: so please don't, he takes it out on Chrona.

Anon is on, IP is off! If you need to contact me, here's the place to do it too~

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[nummeh_souls]

Okay. Second time's worth the charm. Curse you, LJLogin. It's great to have the shyster Meister back in Discedo, and for that you definitely have my thanks.

Though I do still have some helpful advice to offer, after picking up on a few things that I've noticed from canon and how Chrona interactions within the game.

First of all, I don't think that the stutter that you've been using really fits well. Stuttering has never really been a problem for Chrona in canon, and so this feels awkward to me. Instead, she seems to be very soft-spoken and has a harder time of knowing what to say to people in general. Try a more shy approach instead.

Then feeding into that, Chrona seems to be more... open? This isn't necessarily a bad thing, since the interaction here will do you a lot of good in the long run. It's just that it's a little odd, since I always interpreted her as being a person who gets very easily scared of new people and experiences ("I don't know how to deal with this.").

Just my two cents.

[mr_corner_n_me]

Alright, I was using the stutter to help with the soft-spokenness, so I'll ditch it XD I wasn't sure if it was working or not.

Mm, yeah, I was trying to make her a little more open just to help with overall character interactions..since it'd be hard for her to make friends if she was getting freaked all the time XD But I agree, maybe I've been doing a little TOO open. I'll pull back :O

Thanks for the two cents, you've bought a cookie! /gives :D
It really does help.

[chainofironrose]

H'lo there, I lurk around and read Chrona's entries from time to time because I play him/her myself and like to see what other people do with him/her. Also, I was the one who made the Ragnarok icon if you were looking for someone to credit it to :>

[mr_corner_n_me]

Hullo! XD I do that sometimes too..oh! I'll definately credit now! Thank you for telling me! Haha sometimes my friends throw icons at me and don't tell me the credit, but it was good and I wanted to use it. If you don't want me to use it though, do tell me and I will swap it for a different one!

[chainofironrose]

Nah, it's cool. I find it flattering that anybody would use an icon I made.

[mr_corner_n_me]

Sweet~ Thank you for letting me know!