The only part where I got lost was that little insert panel on the second page between where he gets his leg chomped and is pulled to the surface. I couldn't quite tell what I was looking at. Some fish skin? I got it eventually, but had to go back.
Thanks Robin! Honestly, there are quite a few things about this comic that really bug me, but I'm past the point of playing with it anymore. It was an experiment & I learned a lot from doing it; now I have to move on & just make a new one. I'm glad you liked it though.
Great to see these! I love the cover and Nandi's expression on that first page first panel. The blood and water in that panel on the beach are great too - great blacks.
Thanks Jason! I find when I don't like something about my comics, it's often because there's not enough black on the page, it think there's a good balance in that beach panel though..
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The only part where I got lost was that little insert panel on the second page between where he gets his leg chomped and is pulled to the surface. I couldn't quite tell what I was looking at. Some fish skin? I got it eventually, but had to go back.
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I guess we'll just have to wait and see.
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