Give me feed back on this! Do you understand what is going on, is it clear, etc?

[mrbloober]

The lights flickered on, and the monstrous shape of Dr. Polar lumbered through the glimmering laboratory, breathing heavily as though his large mass was too much for even himself to carry. Past metal workbenches and silver carts stacked with robotic parts and electronic paraphernalia he trudged, clicking switches and twisting dials in a rough

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[nikki_jazz]

Well..there is a polar bear...and...a robot(?) under the sheet.

[thewackypants]

waaait a minute! Dr.Polar's a CAT!