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mrcrowley19

All We Really Want Are Girls.

Jun 02, 2010 23:52

Title: Dibs
Pairing: Gabilliam, A little Nalex, And a tiny Travis crushing on Ms. Perry.
Summary: The young boy known as Gabe made a thinking noise while he rubbed his chin. “I want.. A girl who can. Uh- I want a girl who can do all that stuff and smell really good at the same time. Yep.” Gabe said finishing with a nod.
Rating: I don't know G? Well If ( Read more... )

side of nalex, gabilliam

Comments 17

All We Really Want Are Girls. bookxbutterfly June 7 2010, 03:39:19 UTC

gahh!! that was so so so so adorable. <333 i lalalove it. :D

Re: All We Really Want Are Girls. mrcrowley19 June 7 2010, 13:57:22 UTC

Thank you <33

happyemo777 June 7 2010, 15:44:57 UTC

That was so adorable! I love Travis having a crush on Katy (I can imagine her being a teacher for some reason) and calling 'dibs' on her.

'“Isn’t she a bit old?” Sisky said raising an eyebrow

“Older women. So what? My mom is older than my dad by two years!”

“And Ms. Perry is older than him by like twenty.” Alex whispered into Nate’s ear making him erupt with giggles.'

Oh God, you're a real great writer!

mrcrowley19 June 8 2010, 02:57:06 UTC

Yay for quoting <3

Thank you it means a lot to me :) I'm glad you enjoyed it

caffyheart June 8 2010, 00:51:17 UTC

OHMYGODTHATWASSOFUCKINGCUUUUTE. ♥

I'm making a weird squeeing sound right now, but my voice is strained, and it sounds like a cat being choked. It's like "eaaeaeeeaaaaeaeaaaaa" or something. I look and sound really stupid right now because I lalalove kid!fics, and I love kid!fics where Gabe mistakes Bill for a girl. xD ♥

But, oooh, you have one little typo, my dear. ^-^

“The last test.” Gabe said before diving in and hugging William and sniffing his chestnut colored hair. Taking in the sent of strawberries.
"sent" should be "scent". :3

This was adorableeee. ♥ Well, I already said that but I'll say it again and again. xD ♥

Oh, and, have a cookie for your awesomeness!
-gives cookie- ♥

mrcrowley19 June 8 2010, 03:00:15 UTC

Aw crud *goes and fixes the typo*

Thank you for the cookies! (and the really sweet comment) on nom nom nom :3

sabakuno_rose February 16 2011, 03:59:35 UTC

goosh this is like my favorite fanfic EVER!
i've read it like a million times and i still can't get enough,
this is truly cute and amazing, and so are you...
Thank you sooo much for posting this, you're the best <3

sabakuno_rose April 8 2011, 03:11:30 UTC

it's lovely!
you should totally do a second part where bilvy and gabe are walking towards bilvy's house holding hans or something :3
Cuz it's amazing!!!!