Literature time

[mrpaco]

I wrote this for Creative Writing II last year...it seemed pretty appropriate for my last post before moving into my dorm and starting a whole new life. This is unedited from when I wrote it some five months ago, so excuse any immaturity, har har. Maybe someday soon I'll revisit it and make it a little better. I still think the spirit is what's

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wow

[meltinthecold]

that was really intense. i loved the tom delaughter.

i'm confused though, did YOU write those, or are they quotations? either way, i commend you for having either excellent taste or an amazing way with words.

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[mrpaco]

The bolded parts followed by italics are quotations. All the normal un-bolded-un-italicized text, I wrote. 'Scalled a fragmented essay, where you break up your own stream of consciousness with quotes related to the paragraphs next to them.

So, if I may ask, which parts are you talking about when you say "intense" and "amazing way with words"? The quotes? Or the in-betweens that I did?

You know you can be honest. Not that you've ever pulled any punches with me..

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[meltinthecold]

oh! i thought the bold words were titles. i was referencing to the unbold/unitalic words.

yeeuhh!

Re: wow

[mrpaco]

Well in that case, thank you! D'you see what I was doing, now?

[kyriaquinzel]

i can see you being one of the people english classes have to dissect-- when you get published. XD

[musicalfrog]

isn't this the one you were thinking of maybe trying out with for a graduation speech? if it is, i still love it. if it's not, i love it anyway. good luck!

[musicalfrog]

i just got your thank you note. it was sweet. you're welcome for everything!

<3

[thekreet]

So I heard about your roomate... Happy Adulthood there Patrick.

aw

[meltinthecold]

aw thanks for the cheer up comment. i AM good now, and yeah, he listened. thank you though! ur advise is what i did, and its what worked. the next day he got out of band practice for me :).