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[mrs_norrington]

I'm thinking this sentence might be in contention for the opening line:

"I have to pull the laces tighter or you’ll never fit into the dress, sir."

I'm still trying to figure out the characters of Edward and Nicholas and their relationship, but I'm writing again at least. I'm sure this idea has or will have plotholes the size of a black hole, but

Comments

[mrs_norrington]

I don't know whether I think it's funny because I wrote it or because it is, but this is my other favorite bit of the night

[wicked_jade]

That might just be the best opening line ever. :) I know I'd read any story that started like that, anyway.

[mrs_norrington]

Thanks! :) I'm glad it's going well so far then. lol

[pearly_dreams]

That is an awesome open line. ^_^ And there's definitely interest here. I reread your previous post about Edward and Nicholas after I commented and finally managed to grasp the entirety of it. xP My brain's completely fried today.