Glee - Tell Me I'm Not a Lie - 3/? - NC17

[mrs_sakuma]

 

Comments

[theauthor2010]

Oh god this made me tear up. Good good job.

[mrs_sakuma]

thanks. sorry for the tears. things will get better. but they're gonna get worse, too.~

[joyful]

OMG. This is amazing and horrible. I can't wait for more.

[mrs_sakuma]

thank you. i feel bad when i get these comments saying how bad it made them feel, but that's what it's aiming for, and i just never know quite what to say.~

[crystalbunny5]

This story is so amazing! It is emotional as hell, but I can't wait for more. The way you write Kurt is just....Beautiful

[mrs_sakuma]

thank you.~

[joyful]

I absolutely love Finn's POV here.

There was one nitpick I was goingto make on chapter 2, but completely forgot. The hymen covers the outside of the vulva, there are no actual internal barriers. Wes wouldn't be able to slide a finger inside and then notice the barrier. The hymen would be visible from the outside.

Everything else is absolutely amazing, though, and I look forward to more.

[mrs_sakuma]

oh. yeah, see, that shows how well i know my anatomy (and i'm a girl, you'd think i'd at least know that, right?). seriously, everything i know about sex, i learned from fanfiction, and i always read about having to push through the barrier, like halfway through. thank you for the information, i will forever make use of it (should i write more virgin!fem fic, which seems... like a maybe? since i generally write slash).

i just wrote two pages of chapter four, and i know how the next couple parts will go (puck will probably pov chapter five), but i haven't decided yet on ND reactions. i'm figuring on a mix, but obviously nothing as bad as the dalton kids (and even if it were, finn and puck are there to kick some ass).~

[darkangle102]

This fic is so amazing and emotional as hell, but I can't wait for more.

p.s The way you write Kurt is just Beauti-fucking-ful

[mrs_sakuma]

thanks! hopefully i'll have more soon.~