FIC Battleships, Tensions and Hello Kitty Panties (Paris/Rory, 2/4?, R) Drabble #1 for burningeden

[mrschimpf]

Title: Battleships, Tensions and Hello Kitty Panties | Chapter Two | Apologies & Further Strategies
Author: Nate
Pairing: Paris/Rory, Rory/Lane, future allusions to Paris/Lane/Rory
Spoilers: Spoilers? None here that I know of except the guys of the girls are just history and Zach never moved in on Lane.
Rating: R (sexual situations, profanity,

Comments

[jay00789]

Yeesssss! I'm so glad you decided to keep going with this. Can't wait for the next one! Well done.

[ubiquitousmixie]

i'm so glad i finally got the chance to read this :)

i really like how you gave us some insight into what paris would be thinking about following their first time. i know for me, i'd have been extremely put out and jealous and feeling like i wasn't worth the effort of an original idea...and i love how you had paris explore that and then bring it up to rory. the way they handled it was raw and intimate and open - everything a strong relationship should be.

i loved this :) i can't wait to see where you go with it!

[shigeki_jkp]

Dude I just started reading your work roughly a week ago and I just finished this today on ff.net. I had to stop by and say your work is amazing. Very well written , very beleiveable and very in character...hell I just watched the spring break kiss/ ep and I can't see the show any other way than paris and rory. So...thanks for that Consider me hooked on your fics man. As long as you write Paris and Rory, I'm down to read it.

Also the strip battleship was brilliant.

[shigeki_jkp]

Also..this? Freakin hot...ya know just so ya know.