FIC: Drabble Challenge #1 - Theraputic Relaxaton (Paris/Rory, PG-13, 1/1) for

[mrschimpf]

Title: Theraputic Relaxation
Author: Nate
Pairing: Paris/Rory, 3rd person POV
Spoilers: Mid-season three, no relationships for either Paris or Rory, during debate season
Rating: PG-13 (non-explicit sexual situations)
Disclaimer: A-SP, DPDHP, Hofflund-Polone and Warner Bros. Television has the Gilmore Girls, I don't. It's that simple, folks, I'm

Comments

[ubiquitousmixie]

Is it hot in here, or is it just me?

That was absolutely wonderful! I very much enjoyed vicariously experiencing the relaxing nature of the bath that you set this drabble in, and loved how you let Paris's worries drift away. It was only natural that her typical problems be replaced by more sensual feelings, and I loved the fact that she accidentally made herself privy to Rory's bedroom activities. Very hot and very sexy!

You did a great job in keeping to the word limit! You are a word man at heart, and I greatly enjoyed seeing you express your ideas so effortlessly with such brevity.

Loved it!! Thank you :D

[piedra_lumbre]

Lovely work as usual. It was a treat to stumble on this extra little bit of PRory loveliness after listening to your interview with Allaine and Ubiquitousmixie and deciding that I ought to find your page on LJ and see what else you were doing at the moment. I do have one quibble: ". . .a quiet Saturday night before her and Rory had to go back home. . ." probably ought to read 'she and Rory'. which fortunately doesn't change the word count.