Comments | mrsedjack: of washing machines and lost keys

mrsedjack

of washing machines and lost keys

Aug 12, 2009 20:37

title: of washing machines and lost keys
pairing: jaechun, jaemin (my bias is like that)
length: 4,468 words - oneshot!
rating: r due to bad language and uh, dirty boys doing dirty things going on next door.
summary: in which yoochun hates newcomers.

author’s note: very, very late birthday present for apple-of-my-eye
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!length: oneshot, !fic: dbsk, !fic, !rated: r/nc-seventeen, !pairing: jaejoong/yoochun

Comments 61

angel_9_lives August 12 2009, 19:27:41 UTC

(i could tell people to please comment, but would it work? you tell me. :D)

tell ya what...you write more, and I'll comment more:D (pretty please?)

~Angel

mrsedjack August 12 2009, 19:33:16 UTC

write more in general, or write more jaechun? xD i think i write plenty jaemin.

thanks for commenting! :D

angel_9_lives August 12 2009, 21:33:58 UTC

lol more in general~

~Angel

roselit August 12 2009, 21:27:33 UTC

this is insanely cute and if i were on a computer at the moment, i'd keysmash how much i adore your yoochun, and your jaejoong. the ending is so flailworthy♥

mrsedjack August 19 2009, 20:33:13 UTC

dianediane. :) you make me smiiiiile. ♥

mini2ujsu August 12 2009, 21:45:10 UTC

I love this, Jae's singlemindedness...he was gonna have Yuchun...one way or the other...telling everyone 'he saw him first' LOL...I liked the way you describe Yuchun's feelings and observations of Jaejung subtly changing...was that all Jae wanted or does it blossom further...I could read more of that xxx

mrsedjack August 19 2009, 20:34:46 UTC

i always end up making jaejoong really singleminded! 8D maybe that's how i perceive him or something, i don't know. but he always goes directly for his target!
don't think there will be a sequel or anything, but i've written to write one more one-shot for this 'verse, so you'll probably see more. :)

pinkfluffies August 12 2009, 21:53:56 UTC

♥

long day has been long.
will read after nap.
ilu.
(and WOW. jaechun~ i didn't think ya had it in you ;D )

pinkfluffies August 13 2009, 00:29:23 UTC

okay. wait, what.

uhm.
big gaping hole where the smut should be!!

(he finds the key to his door stuffed into his sock later, where he put it the day before so he wouldn’t lose it.)
LOL. fdal;kfj;sdlkjf;slakfjas chunnie ♥

the jaemin sex at the beginning was so freaking amazing lmao i couldn't stop smirking like, yeah, that's how it's done... or something.
wifey ilu~
MORE WRITING PLEASE.
(do homin next?)
♥♥

mrsedjack August 19 2009, 20:39:56 UTC

WHERE. NO. NOT BIG GAPING HOLE. IT JUST ENDED THERE. xD there was no space for smut.

i do that all the time, and i always forget it! :( it's not only yoochun. it's really hard to remember.

HAHAHA. xD i couldn't stop smirking like, yeah, that's how it's done... or something. what, chelsea.

i am writing homin! :D or. it is kind of homin. it's for the anypairing thing i started months back. but it kind of sucks. :||

ALSO, WRITING SUPERSTAR'VERSE. but popstar or rockstar or actor, i can't decide. :| HELP ME.

♥ x 4.

mrsedjack August 19 2009, 20:35:52 UTC

HOW DO YOU MAKE HEARTS THAT BIG. xD

i know! ö first not-jaemin fic i think this is! and jaechun of all things. but. i didn't manage to make it completely devoid of jaemin. :i

ilulots.

haruko_chan22 August 12 2009, 22:16:24 UTC

you had to end it THERE?!

still very good though ^^

mrsedjack August 19 2009, 20:36:31 UTC

YES. xD because i still can't write smut for the life of me! but as long as you like it anyway... ;)