of washing machines and lost keys

[mrsedjack]

title: of washing machines and lost keys
pairing: jaechun, jaemin (my bias is like that)
length: 4,468 words - oneshot!
rating: r due to bad language and uh, dirty boys doing dirty things going on next door.
summary: in which yoochun hates newcomers.

author’s note: very, very late birthday present for apple-of-my-eye

Comments

[jaeluvsme]

wish i could be more like jaejoong and tell everyone that i saw jaejoong first so back off everyone!

[mrsedjack]

it'd make the world an easier place, i swear! 8D except, you know, this is veeeery much fiction; in the real world, if you told people to back off from jaejoong, people would go, "um, no." xD

[engraved_16]

DDDDDDDDDDDDD:
open ending -sobs-
chun is too cute *O* in denial
haha cancer
Jaemin GAWD
secretly hoped for minsu xDDDDD

&hearts &hearts &hearts
(memms!)

[mrsedjack]

people hate my open endings. xD they're the easy way out though!

there will be minsu in the semi-sequel, if i ever get around to writing it. xD

thank you for mem'ing! ö really, i'm totally flattered. ♥

[shinchul303]

I liked the laundry room scene when Changmin dropped his bombshell.

Chunnie's so clueless; never had a chance really.

A fun read!

[mrsedjack]

changmin's like that. xD and really, someone has to say stuff that needs to be said!

for some reason, i always portray jaejoong is singleminded/spacy and his target as dumb. i'm wondering if me writing this isn't really very offending. xD

but thank you lots anyway. :D ♥

[mrsedjack]

open endings are fun to write. 8D and you can imagine the rest! i can't write smut to save my life, it would have ruined the whole thing.

almost none of my work is locked, so go ahead. :) there isn't much jaechun yet, but i've got a couple in progress! and thank you!

[every_journal]

Damn Seme!Jae is hella funny to me! I also liked the fact that you kept it all in Chuns perspective. And his hurt on the fourth place made me ROFL all over the place. Epic! Realy.

I do have to mention that I deem Jaejoong to have better taste than Orlando Bloom... but that's just me.

*hugs*

[mrsedjack]

i was considering switching it back and forth in perspective, actually, but if you liked it this way, i'm glad i didn't. :D

really? 8D but. orlando bloom is prettaaaay. who'd you suggest? and don't you say yunho, don't.

♥

[every_journal]

Well I just liked the fact that Chun was narrating his own story kinda.... And well Orly is pwetty but kinda two years ago, the hype has faded. Current hype is RPattz but he's too ugly for Jae. I would think he would go for Eric Bana or Gerard Butler... but if he fancies those two there would be no way he'd be attracted to scrawny Chunnie... Let's go with Johnny Depp, he's still hot and kinda scrawny too ^^

[mrsedjack]

but he is stiiiil pretty. xD
ugh, i don't like robert pattison. :| he's too. i don't know. he's too disney for me i think. but maybe i've just aged a couple of years since orlando, and now i see him as a classic. 8D

johnny depp though, i see your point! johnny depp it is!