Comments | mrsmosley: In the Still of the Night (1/1)

mrsmosley

In the Still of the Night (1/1)

Feb 09, 2007 10:33

Title: In the Still of the Night
Fandom: Lois & Clark
Rated: G
Word Count: 1567
Summary: Lois has a conversation with a new friend.
Author's Notes: Many thanks to my friend
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fanfic, supes

Comments 5

ksarasara February 9 2007, 16:16:31 UTC

Ack! My first reaction is: I wanna know Clark's reaction!!! But, really, I don't have to but if you write a little sequel, I won't complain.

I haven't had much time for fic lately (still gotta finish my own!), though I wish I did, so I haven't much other than glanced at the fanfic folder lately. But having a little vignette just sitting on my friend's page when I've got a little extra time this morning... I couldn't resist.

And how lovely it was!!! I've got a big smile and a gooshy (that's not even a word) heart right now! *happy sigh* The opening atmosphere is terrific! Brilliant imagery! I'm tense right along Lois, and I'm not even sure what she's so nervous about! *g* Then, when she finds out, it's just a wonderful moment! Perfect reaction, really. All right, let's see if LJ can handle my commenting style...

I liked the dark silence. It allowed me to believe for a while that there was no one else in the world.

I love this line. Just strikes me as really serene. :)

I negotiated the steps very carefully, already thinking that ( ... )

mrsmosley February 9 2007, 16:23:36 UTC

EEK! What great feedback, Sara, thank you! I loved all your comments, and you noticed a lot of lines that I really like, too, if I do say so myself. :)

ksarasara February 9 2007, 16:58:59 UTC

you noticed a lot of lines that I really like, too

Whee!! That's the part I love most about getting feedback: having people point out those lines I wrote that I just love or was so proud of. *g* So I'm glad I managed to hit on some of yours. ;)

psychofurball February 9 2007, 17:33:14 UTC

Very beautiful, and well written. I Love it. I Demand a sequel!!! I Must know. You can't keep me hanging like that. :)

htbthomas February 10 2007, 00:09:43 UTC

Hey, nice! Lois Lane is pregnant! I wish that had really happened on the show... I understand they didn't want to be messing with canon again... but then SR when and did it anyway. :)

Nice job!