trio update.

[mrsquizzical]

well, at last i have an update!

the next chapter of my triofic is up. *phew*

Title: Evidence of Things Not Seen.
Chapter: Six - How Can One Be Warm Alone
Word Count:4258
Series: This is part two in the "All That They Had Not Lost" story.
Ship: Trio
Rating: MT (Mature Themes)
read it at Table for Three (a triofic archive) or the quidditch pitch

Comments

[iamshadow]

Woo! Yay for new chapter!

I'm so glad they're all snuggly with each other again.

The last bit confused me, but I assume it was a dream, or that it'll be explained come next part. :)

[mrsquizzical]

yes. it's dreams that will be explained.

i was swinging between italicising it and then not... if i did it would be more 'obvious it was a dream sequence'. but i had a dream in part one (atthnl) and it wasn't italicised and thought i should be consistent.

what do you reckon? i could always change it.

[iamshadow]

It's really up to you. I know with my Remus/Sirius (chapters not yet posted) I deliberately *haven't* italicised dreams because I wanted to seriously blur the line between reality and fantasy. Some are obvious because of absurdities, but others are very, very real right up till the end.

[mrsquizzical]

right.

i'm not a fan - generally speaking - of large sections of italics. even though i used it myself in the previous chapter.

oh well. hope the 'surreal-ness' wasn't too offputting.

[rose_starr]

I saw this first thing this morning and was so excited!! I love this fic! And even though she usually drives me crazy, I love every time you mention Luna!! And of course, the subtle GLee references! *grins*

And I loved that Ron and Harry proved to Hermione how much they love and need her (oh, and that vision of the 5 of them asleep and Hermione's thoughts of being surrounded by her babies and her boys made me sniff), but I'm still worried about Hermione.

I can't wait for more!!

[mrsquizzical]

oh i'm glad you like luna. she's VERY difficult to write without making her ridiculous.

not much more of this part to go now!

thanks so much for reading and for your review. *snogs*

[ms_worplesdon]

Can't wait to read this tonight!

[mrsquizzical]

yay.

thanks!