Title: Evidence of Things Not Seen. Chapter: Seven - "And A Threefold Cord Is Not Quickly Broken" (word count - 6000ish ) (previous chapter is here.) Author: mrsquizzical ( Author's Notes: )
I love the shared dream. Oh wouldn't it be wonderful to have the chance to understand your partner like that? And your children too, that soul-connection concept is wonderful. But also scary, I think.
yeah. the connection thing has always been a 'thing' for me. i blame being exposed to pern (and the psychic links between dragons and riders) at a young age!
also, yeah. don't know that the sex scene will ever happen... but you can imagine it for yourself and tell me all about it you want, my love!
I was surprised to see this story posted with an update at TQP, since it's been quite a while since I've read it and I assumed you were no longer continuing it. I appreciate that you took the time to give the readers a bit of closure.
Anyway, I wanted to say that I think you're writing has grown; much, much stronger than how it started out. The flow of it is lovely and a joy to read. I loved Harry's bond with the girls. You paint such a vivid and emotional picture of their family life that we don't even need the triosmex to understand just how strongly they feel for each other.
And of all the things that happened in this story, having Hermione and Ron come to an understanding, at last, of little Harry in the cupboard was so satisfying. Well done.
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also - ♥ you.
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I love the shared dream. Oh wouldn't it be wonderful to have the chance to understand your partner like that? And your children too, that soul-connection concept is wonderful. But also scary, I think.
... alsoIreallywantthesexscene...
*squish*
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also, yeah. don't know that the sex scene will ever happen... but you can imagine it for yourself and tell me all about it you want, my love!
*squishes back*
(epilogue is up now)
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This was worth it! Just getting to read this was so wonderful!! Thank you so much for posting it!!! ♥
(and I totally giggled over you and Maple)
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(we are rather ridiculous. heee!)
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*hugs your Harry*
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thanks for reading, even though it's trio!
i love this harry a ridiculous amount.
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Anyway, I wanted to say that I think you're writing has grown; much, much stronger than how it started out. The flow of it is lovely and a joy to read. I loved Harry's bond with the girls. You paint such a vivid and emotional picture of their family life that we don't even need the triosmex to understand just how strongly they feel for each other.
And of all the things that happened in this story, having Hermione and Ron come to an understanding, at last, of little Harry in the cupboard was so satisfying. Well done.
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♥
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