Comments | mrstotten: LJ Idol Season 20, Open Topic

mrstotten

Jun 07, 2017 00:00

Once upon a time…… oh no wait you’ve heard that haven’t you ( Read more... )

Comments 8

i_17bingo June 7 2017, 12:54:36 UTC

Brilliant start. I particularly enjoyed the mixture of the magic and the mundane, which I am a sucker for. Do you plan on bringing us more Melody?

bewize June 7 2017, 13:51:54 UTC

I enjoyed it. I'd read more!

eternal_ot June 7 2017, 14:00:49 UTC

Glad you did :) I really enjoyed this world and would love to know more about Melody. Loved the details here.

favoritebean June 8 2017, 07:16:52 UTC

I really enjoyed reading your tale. Very nice work.

rayaso June 9 2017, 14:19:29 UTC

I loved this idea! I'm glad it was in your head. The details were great (elf tailored suit) and added to the fun. Great job!