Fic: Bittersweet [standalone]

Nov 27, 2009 18:54

Title: Bittersweet

Author: Ash ms_deathbat

Rating: R

Warnings: non-con, rape, character death, gore, implied cannibalism

Pairing: Rydon

Summary: Brendon has finished his apprenticeship and is out to make a name for himself. Serial!killer!cannibal!brendon/victim!ryan.

Disclaimer: I do not own these boys and this is fake!

Author Notes: THIS IS NOT BETA ( Read more... )

rydon, victim!ryan, cannibal!brendon, summary!fail, serial!killer!brendon, gore!fic, character death, rape, noncon

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rainxdrops12 November 28 2009, 00:58:04 UTC
FC!!


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ms_deathbat November 28 2009, 01:20:03 UTC
YOOUUUU WIN! :D

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rainxdrops12 November 28 2009, 04:22:52 UTC
Well of course I do ;PP lol
but so do you!!!
<33

this is awesome ;D I like being able to edit lol

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ms_deathbat November 28 2009, 04:47:24 UTC
;DDD
\o/
<333

yes THAT IS SO AWESOME! i want a payed account but im broke lol! i was gonna txt you back al like rgfvbreygfvuirgvbfiursehgfvurfbviurfgvbiuhrgvurgviuregvYEAH!!!!! but i couldnt decide if your txting restarted today or not?? Oo lol!

sorry i never got back on. FAIL! i was watching Ice Age, haha! :)

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rinada November 28 2009, 01:06:47 UTC
second comment and now im gonna read it =]

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ms_deathbat November 28 2009, 01:16:23 UTC
haha good that you havent read it yet cause it cut off the beggining, lol! so yeah maybe you should make sure that you read all of it ...LJ!fail ...sorry lol :D

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rinada November 28 2009, 01:20:09 UTC
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh just one word EPIC!!!!!!
finally i just read a really really good rape scene in all of my life!!!! <33
but really its so WOW and you even dont need a beta or anything =]

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ms_deathbat November 28 2009, 01:27:57 UTC
WOW!!! that's...just wow! i LOVE YOU! this comment is epic! and thank you SOOO much! it means the world to me when someone reads and comments on my fic! :D especially when i get comments like this! you just like made my day *hugs you*

haha well thanks for that too! (i would hope my grammar is amazing considering the number of papers ive had to write in the last couple of months, haha) but unfortuanately i need like a professional LJ poster cause i get it wrong, like, everytime i post lol! i hope you actually read the beginning of this cause it helps it to actually, you know make sense! Oo

anyways I LOVE YOU! THANKS AGAIN!

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longerthanwedo November 28 2009, 03:53:17 UTC
Holy shit this is twisted.
But kind of awesome, too.
Haha, I liked it :D

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ms_deathbat November 28 2009, 04:22:38 UTC
haha, yeah! i didn't even know i could write anything this wierd, lol! :D
*grins* that is kind of amazing coming from you cause i really like your fics!
thank you so much for reading and commenting!
<3

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longerthanwedo November 28 2009, 04:23:49 UTC
you're welcome! and thanks :)
i guess i'm kind of twisted too XD as you probably know, lol.

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ms_deathbat November 28 2009, 04:49:35 UTC
\o/

yep, maybe just a bit. lol!

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:D deadoralive0013 November 28 2009, 09:01:09 UTC
I was about to start writing JG's next chapter when I saw this on my flist... So I have to admit, this is a guilty pleasure of mine, reading Brendon as some kind of twisted rapist/killer with Ryan as his victim. :D

So yeah, when you said gore, I was like "gore?"... and after I was done reading, I was like "GORE!" XD I was flinching while reading some parts of it do good job on that... hehe.

This is a very hurried comment because I have somewhere to go to like... right now. Nevertheless, the bottom line is I like it. Good job! :D

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Re: :D ms_deathbat November 29 2009, 04:14:26 UTC
haha well jeez i can't believe i interrupted the JG writing, lol! cause im like dying to read the next chapter, haha.
but yes i love this kind of stuff too! actually Handcuffs (by uncomfortable and glitzkriegbop) is the fic that made me think hey i want to try to write something sick and twisted and really i think i kind of creeped myself out with this, lol, like how the fuck did i write that! but yeah it was a really interesting piece to write.

haha yeah i didnt know anything else to describe it except that, haha! GORE! lol! and that is kind of amazing, in a way, that i can get that kind of reaction from a reader *flails*

haha its okay im just glad you did comment! it means alot, love! and yes i really was pround of that last line, even if it is creepy, lol!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!

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Re: :D deadoralive0013 November 29 2009, 11:34:40 UTC
Haha... JG can wait especially when a rapefic this good has been posted. :D

No problem. ^__^

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youfeelittoo December 10 2009, 20:35:51 UTC
omg, I feel like puking... sick but wonderful.
but I still loved it.

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ms_deathbat January 26 2011, 19:31:55 UTC
thank you so much! :D i really appreciate you reading this and taking the time to comment.

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