My sermon, update

[ms_interpret]

So I showed my sermon to Heidi, to Chris and to you guys. I got some good feedback. I also had a few ideas of my own in the interim. So I'm gonna make let you read it again for me

Comments

[hitchhiker]

I like it a lot. It's much tighter and more streamlined than the previous iteration, and more positive in tone overall.

[ms_interpret]

Actually, I don't think the tone changed much, except that I ended it on a positive note, and that sticks with you.

Thanks. I really appreciate the input.