Oh wow, I wrote something in here--not a poem, just a collection of words

Mar 19, 2005 03:56


Dying fishes sink, not float

Suctioned, she falls

To an imploding death

"I can't swim with ripped fins"

she said

Body is frail and shriveled

Laying dead on the bottom

With

Glass-coated wide eyes

Stare intensely at nothing

Who knows

How many tears

Went missed, unnnoticed hidden

In the salt water where she lives...

she lives in her tears

Wallowing in ( Read more... )

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buddhax March 19 2005, 09:37:15 UTC
I like it. Sad, but I like it.

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gammajohn March 20 2005, 09:25:39 UTC
it is sad, but i'm glad you're still alive, hadn't heard anything from you in a while.

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