Una Fuerza Imparable - Cap. 20

[ms_moodified]

Título: Capítulo 20
Fandom: LHDP
Pareja: Pepa/Silvia
Calificación: En principio, R.

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Bueno, pues nuevo capítulo. La trama avanza un poquito en la actualización de hoy, tampoco mucho, pero algo es algo. Que la cosa estaba un poco parada. Espero que lo disfrutéis, y como

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[rugaji91]

Hola moodi =)
okay todo entre Aisha y Pepa parece ser amistoso...pero bueno como dice el dicho "las apariencias enga~an"
asi que no me fio...puede que Aisha este aparentando amistad para acercarse a Pepa.
Aunque, debo decir que seria bonito que Pepa tuviese una amiga de verdad.
La amistad es hermosa cuando los amigos son verdaderos. O quiza soy yo la que quiero creer que Aisha solo busca la amistad de Pepa.
Y no me digas que Pepa le esta mintiendo a todos y no va ir a ver a su mama si no que va detras del gordo....
ayyyyyyyyy Pepita en que lios te vas a meter...
Y que bien que Pepa y Silvia se la pasen bien juntas...y que Pepa extra~e a la pelirroja ..eso almenos me tranquiliza un poco...digo por si Aisha se quiere meter enmedio.
Moodi gracias por la actu y bueno espero seguir leyendote pronto.
La actu estubo padre =)
Saludos desde LA!

[ms_moodified]

¡Hola!

¡Otra vez la primerísima en comentar! ;)

Pepa está ahora mismo un poco fuera de su salsa, necesita hacer algo para volver a sentirse bien, pero creo que no tiene muy claro qué es lo que debe hacer. Así que vamos a verla dar unos cuantos palos de ciego en lo que está por venir.

En cuanto a su amistad con Aisha, pues... puede que sea sólo eso, amistad, o puede que no. No voy a desvelar nada, se irá desarrollando la trama poquito a poco. Así que, mucho me temo que vas a tener que seguir leyendo un poco más.:P

¡Gracias, como siempre, por pasarte y por comentar!

[lovelyafterglow]

Crappy chapter?! Joo crazy. You're forgiven for not posting the other night, because this was really great. ;-) It had insight into Pepa's changed psyche, a glimpse of the burgeoning "friendship" between her and Aisha, early-morning cuteness between the girls, and an intriguing new plot twist! Oh, and how could I forget, it even had Pepa's mommie dearest.

I have to say you did an awesome job of describing all that running...I swear, I was getting winded just from reading it. I was smoking a cigarette outside at 10:30 (and it was still 90 degrees out...er, 32 celsius, I think), and I seriously felt like I was getting a work-out myself as I was reading, haha.

And, now it seems Pepa's off to Italy. I wish she were just going on an impromptu vacay, but things are never that simple, are they? Le sigh.

Angst ahoy!

p.s. Thanks ever so much for mentioning the Sorolla station. It brought back such fond memories of "tic...tac...tic...tac" and wanting to commit hara-kiri.

p.p.s Race ya to the next update!! :-P

[ms_moodified]

Thank you!

I'm happy to see that you liked the chapter! I was a bit unsure about the result, because I had the impression that it felt a bit rushed. As if I was trying to make too many points in just one update, but anyway...

I swear, I was getting winded just from reading it. I was smoking a cigarette outside at 10:30 (and it was still 90 degrees out...er, 32 celsius, I think), and I seriously felt like I was getting a work-out myself as I was reading, haha.

Maybe the cigarette and the scorching heat had something to do with that, too. But thanks for giving me the credit! :P

p.s. You are so very welcome, wouldn't want you to forget Spain so soon! hehe.

p.p.s. That's a race I would gladly lose! I can't wait to read that dinner scene from your next update...even if, somehow, I have the feeling that not everything is gonna be fun and games with them.

p.p.p.s. I'm already working on my next update, but I dare you to post yours before I post mine! ;)

[lovelyafterglow]

Okay, okay...the cigarette and heat may have had a little something to do with it. I still say the writing was very effective, too, though.

And, no, it didn't really feel rushed. There was quite a bit of set-up, but you sometimes just can't get around these sorts of chapters that are obviously meant to segue into the next important plotline, ya know?

As for racing, err, I'm thinking I'll be the one to lose. (And if nearly fainting while sitting outside on a chair reading is any indication...I should probably think twice about attempting any sort of racing!) I have a few kinks in the story that I need to work out...if I can't get it figured out soon, I'll probably be sending you an email to get your input and mine your knowledge. ;-)

[ms_moodified]

Mine ahead! Anything to help me read the next chapter of your story as soon as possible you put those finishing touches on your story.

Just kidding, mostly... Seriously though, I would be happy to help. My fingernails would be happy too, what's left of them anyway. ;)

Edited because me and English don't get along as well as I like to believe. *facepalm*