Attention all scholarship appliers...

[ms_polly]

here is an essay.

*ahem*

The Trees at the Foot of the Hill

I am a morning person.  Not the insanely cheerful “seize the day type”, not the one you want to dump your hot coffee on every time they shriek “good morning!”; I love my sleep just as much as you or the man sitting next to you in Starbucks.  I am the rise with the morning sun, embrace the

Comments

[janeaustenfreak]

I like it, but I do think that you should maybe cut down on some of the lists of adjectives you made in some of the sentences. Switch up your style a little bit. Does that help?

You're amazing, by the way.

[meeshyx3]

I'd just like to expresses to you through another internet medium the deep sadness i feel because you aren't coming to visit me. k, thats all, have a wonderful day...without me... LOVE YOU! Oh - and i thought this paper was really beautifully written! I really like the first paragraph, but agree with Claire on the second paragraph - a bit overdescriptive. It made me want to wake up early sometime though, and thats impressive, since we all know how much i despise waking up early. So cudos on making something i hate look very appealing!

[ms_polly]

I am sorry!

I love you an miss you.

I will send you pictures and phone messages A.S.A.P.