Comments | ms_shalimar: That First Small Step

ms_shalimar

That First Small Step

Dec 20, 2007 23:00

Title: That First Small Step
Fandom: Whose Line UK
Pairing: Tony/Greg
Rating: PG to PG-13. One swearword, but it's one of the stronger ones.
Summary: Tony can't sleep, and Greg wants to help.
Disclaimer: This fic is in no way intended to portray a true representation of the people involved. As far as I know, this never happened.

Cross-posted to britline, whoselineslash ( Read more... )

slash, fanfic100, tony slattery, tony/greg, whose line, fanfic, greg proops

Comments 10

cryforthemoon December 20 2007, 23:55:32 UTC

Oh, that's beautiful. I love the way you've written them; it's so tender and gentle andand I'm running out of adjectives.

ms_shalimar December 21 2007, 00:07:51 UTC

:D Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.

iamcrazyodo December 21 2007, 04:24:25 UTC

Yay! More Tony/Greg. Me likes.
One word: heartwarming.

ms_shalimar December 21 2007, 09:02:48 UTC

:D Thank you. Glad you enjoyed

paranoiaheights December 23 2007, 17:18:34 UTC

Love it, as I always do :3 I love your writing, you write them so well, they're just the cutest couple ever, and I always look forward to your short fics :D

Thanks for brightening up my day :)

ms_shalimar December 29 2007, 22:20:32 UTC

Hee, they are indeed a cute couple, and their muses are surprisingly cooperative *pets* though I am also getting bunnies for other pairings (very distant ones, until the fic that must be finished is done)

Glad to have been of assistance *hands cookie and rainbow sparkles*

paranoiaheights December 30 2007, 14:50:25 UTC

Aha, *strokes Greg and Tony* I know I mustn't but they're just so cute!

Yay *dies because of all the happiness*

eatyourfudge December 24 2007, 14:33:14 UTC

Love how you swap to surnames at the end, hilarious. You're dialogue is great too, especially Greg's, you've got style so right.

ms_shalimar December 29 2007, 22:23:32 UTC

:D Thank you, glad you enjoyed the fic and the dialogue :)

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Re: Feedback month ms_shalimar May 7 2008, 17:51:14 UTC

Aw, thank you. :D Don't worry about rambling, I enjoy finding out which bits work etc. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic - and I couldn't let it slide without a hint of Colin/Ryan! Unless I'm pairing one of them with someone else, I like to have them as a background pairing.

Anyhoo, thanks again for reading and commenting. The feedback is much appreciated.