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oakapea January 8 2008, 10:37:00 UTC
Awwww! This was just the dose of sweetness I needed to start my day! I loved both chapters... they're a bit angsty but the overwhelming theme of hope and the character's themselves are enough to overcome this--tis' great! The line about Tony introducing Greg to himself made me chuckle and want to hug him :3 Thanks for posting!

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ms_shalimar January 8 2008, 10:54:08 UTC
Hee, glad you enjoyed. They are rather angsty, it's true, but then to my mind, almost anything with Tony needs it as an undertone or he's not him. *IMHO*

Anyhoo, thank you for reading and commenting :D

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eatyourfudge January 10 2008, 02:41:46 UTC
That is true though, if there wasn't hints that Tony is inherently angst-filled, it would be so out of character. Multi-layed ftw!

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ms_shalimar January 10 2008, 08:53:59 UTC
Absolutement!

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syien_island January 8 2008, 17:22:18 UTC
"Everything okay? Or is Mr Slattery having one of his drama queen moments?"

Am I the only one who wanted to slap Ryan upside the head?

Thank you for updating! Greg and Tony is my new OTP, all thanks to you.

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ms_shalimar January 9 2008, 09:07:20 UTC
Hee, no worries, glad you enjoyed!

And yeah, I have some...probably unusual views about the dynamic between Ryan and Tony. One of these days it may get explored in fic, but we shall see.

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amortentia_x January 8 2008, 22:57:30 UTC
"Do I get to kiss you again now?"

That line is made of cuteness :)

His eyes held a thousand questions, but somehow none of them made it to his mouth.

And I liked that one two.

I adored the first chapter two; you write wonderfully and you can make the characters so realistic. I also read this story at exactly the right time, it really spoke to me (and Greg sweeping Tony's hair out of his eyes in the first chapter = ♥; I've always thought it was sweet how he always used to flick it out of his eyes :]).

x

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ms_shalimar January 9 2008, 09:15:36 UTC
Ah yes, the hair flick is very cute, bless him.

Anyhoo, glad you enjoyed :)

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telynmurali January 10 2008, 01:14:33 UTC
This was wonderful! This line made me melt:

. "Well I don't know about you, but I was kissing the most wonderful man I've ever met."

But it's all ALL so sweet, and so perfect, and you got everyone's voices so well, and it was such a great lift from the angstiness that can threaten to overwhelm in stories about Tony. I adored both chapters of it.

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ms_shalimar January 10 2008, 08:56:53 UTC
*has just died* Greg in NIN tshirt FTW!

*ahem* Anyhoo, thank you for reading and commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed :)

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eatyourfudge January 10 2008, 02:39:20 UTC
"Okay, I'm ready."

Colin and Greg both looked up as Tony came downstairs, looking as if he hadn't a care in the world. Greg grinned widely. "Well, don't you scrub up well."

"Hey Tony, how are you? Delighted you're going to be joining us tonight." Colin smiled warmly. "You look well."

"Please, I look like I haven't slept in months. Probably because I haven't, but I do wish it wasn't so obvious." Tony shrugged a little, his tone still bright.

You are the Tony-speak MASTER, I must say. This is so, so, so sweet, I'm actually dying.

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ms_shalimar January 10 2008, 09:04:00 UTC
Aw, thank you *blushes* I can only thank my Tony!muse for that (and copious watching of things with Tony in)

*revives you from the dying*

Anyway, thank you again and glad you enjoyed.

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eatyourfudge January 11 2008, 01:41:28 UTC
*reviv'd*
Well, you've picked it up terribly well. Hats off.

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