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ms_shalimar

Shattered Dreams: She

Jan 10, 2008 13:12

Title: Shattered Dreams: She ( Read more... )

fanfic100, writing, whose line, fanfic, shattered dreams, josie lawrence, tony slattery, josie/tony, greg proops, fandom

Comments 10

syien_island January 13 2008, 00:38:05 UTC

I love Josie to death. She's impossible to dislike. But I feel for poor Greg!

ms_shalimar January 13 2008, 00:44:46 UTC

:)Thanks for reading and commenting.

Josie's not exactly a favourite, I have to admit (though oddly, I'm liking her more as I write her), but she makes a good het match for Tony. *shrug*

telynmurali January 13 2008, 02:50:29 UTC

*squirms* But oh, Greg! Still, you write Josie well, and why Tony loves her is very plain. :)

ms_shalimar January 13 2008, 11:57:23 UTC

*worships the icon some more*

Glad Josie's coming across okay - I was being careful not to completely villify her, hence how the twist came about that they would stay a couple. And I'm just glad that I got her personality somewhat right :)

Anyhoo, thank you for reading and commenting on these two parts :)

youreyesaregems January 13 2008, 16:52:51 UTC

I'm not a - I do apologize - massive fan of Tony, but I've read this and the first part and really enjoyed them both. I like that you kept Josie and Tony together; I think it works much better than, completely villifyng her would have done.

Off to read the next part now =)

ms_shalimar January 13 2008, 18:42:36 UTC

No need to apologise, hon :) Glad you're enjoying the fic, and the direction it ended up taking. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

eatyourfudge January 16 2008, 02:01:06 UTC

You write Josie well, I agree. But that doesn't stop her pissing. me. off.

Oh god she annoys me! And aww Greg <3

ms_shalimar January 16 2008, 09:07:53 UTC

Hee, thanks for reading. I have to admit, I wasn't out for Josie to upset people *eep*, though originally it was going to end up Tony/Greg.

But hopefully, the final installment (when I can write a decent ending for it *grr*) will make things a bit better.

eatyourfudge January 16 2008, 11:21:34 UTC

Oh, it wasn't particulary her actions that irritated me! She just annoys me in general. I look forward to reading the end (and of course you'll be able to write a decent ending!) :)

ms_shalimar January 16 2008, 12:42:58 UTC

Ah, I'm not really a Josie fan myself, which is precisely why I didn't split her and Tony up - it would have been too easy to descend into bashing, which is never a nice thing to see in fic.

And believe me, endings are my weakness. I have two fics, including the end of this, that are done except I can't round them off *snarls* Even the smut I'm writing to try and fix that is being awkward with me.