Comments | ms_wolbra: the game [jonghyun/minho]

ms_wolbra

the game [jonghyun/minho]

Aug 01, 2011 21:39

Title: The Game
Pairing: Jonghyun/Minho
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~4,500
Summary: Minho was always competitive, whether he was aware of it or not. Inspired/taken by this picture.

( you wanna play the game? )

member:minho, member:jonghyun, pairing:jonghyun/minho, fandom:shinee, type:one-shot, story:the game

Comments 26

rainstormraider August 2 2011, 04:30:53 UTC

That was beautiful and realistic and so heart-rendingly gorgeous.
I loved how you developed it and I was most affected by the scene with Minho dealing with the personal tragedy...very lushly written and fantastically stylized.

ms_wolbra August 2 2011, 23:59:42 UTC

;~; thank you for such lovely compliments! and meep i felt bad about doing that to minho, but jonghyun comforted him so it's all good ne?

i'm glad you liked it that much ^^~

paranoiascreams August 2 2011, 04:37:19 UTC

SPOT.

paranoiascreams August 2 2011, 04:52:01 UTC

the progress of their relationship was beautifully written, it was as if i was watching two of my friends fall in love.

i dont mind them sleeping, i wrote a jongho chaptered fic with the both of them sleeping ending almost all chapters.

write more.

ms_wolbra August 3 2011, 00:01:27 UTC

falling in love always takes time; i can't get those love at first sight things >x< and jongho's cute so it's easy to watch them fall in love c:

haha i guess i'm not the only one then ^^~

omo i will do my best, especially since it's coming from such a big name in the jongho community.

thank you for reading :3

paranoiascreams August 3 2011, 16:42:25 UTC

waahhhh /blush

i kind of went on hiatus so it makes me happy to see amazing jongho writers out there (im not saying im amazing, i just know that i did write a lot of jongho. hahaha)

i shall stalk u~

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shan_ah_non August 2 2011, 04:44:19 UTC

lovely <3
hope to read mire from you ^^

shan_ah_non August 2 2011, 04:55:24 UTC

More*

ms_wolbra August 3 2011, 00:02:09 UTC

i will try my best to bring more jongho ^^~

thank you thank you~

jongkeyfan408 August 2 2011, 11:30:56 UTC

This was adorable <3 Thank you for sticking with this and finishing it, it turned out amazing in the end :)

ms_wolbra August 3 2011, 00:02:32 UTC

awwww thank you so much! i'm glad i stuck with it too. thank you for reading ^^~

bffimagine August 2 2011, 20:46:17 UTC

FCKING LOVE THIS SO HARD <3

They're so soft in this fic it's just adorable. Usually their competitiveness is macho/violent/physical but here it's subtle and it's cute :D I might just like it this way better ;)

Thanks for sharing!

ms_wolbra August 3 2011, 00:04:33 UTC

omo thank you ^^~

haha x3 i feel like their machoness is just a coverup for them being such softies >w< & i'm glad to have changed your preference ^^

and no no thank you for reading and commenting :3