elma would have loved you. she was my everything.

Aug 13, 2005 11:16


she stands in her driveway..
a string of pearls around her neck..
a string of words around her tongue..

waiting..

for someone..

something..

to paint her sky.

she stands there..

waiting..

just another sparkle embedded in the sidewalk.


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teamsleep1705 August 13 2005, 19:10:36 UTC
this entry inspired me to write this:

they glorify her like a harvest moon in november.
they wait for her to light up; setting up a parade.
they like to parade her like i do. but she never shows up.
she doesn't like a big crowd. so the crowd starts to fade.
but i'll stick around. i believe that one day she'll show up.

p.s
i miss you.

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mselektrikocean August 14 2005, 20:53:39 UTC
oh ted your writing is beautiful. you really have a knack for poetry.

i miss you too.

hopefully i'll see you before school starts.

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falltopieces13 August 26 2005, 18:49:07 UTC
hey ep!! this is amazing i cant even find words to explain it. you have drawing 6th with engle right??? im taking independent study with mueller that hour and andrews usually in there with me u should come say hi sometime.=D

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falltopieces13 November 3 2005, 16:09:05 UTC
ep! i <3 you. everytime i see you you make my day better.

PS-
i had been wondering if i could have your permission to use a phrase from your live journal as an opening to one of my essay's for college. i of course wouldn't take credit for your work. but if you don't mind i'd really like to use it. i'll put ur name in if that's how you'd like me to do it, or i wont use it at all. just let me know. =)

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mselektrikocean November 3 2005, 20:22:38 UTC
oo katie that makes me feel so wonderful. thank you so much.

which phrase would you like to use? (i'd be honored)

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