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msemmaloo

Kissing Friday

Nov 24, 2009 23:18

Title: Kissing Friday
Characters: whole team
Rating PG

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Comments 5

jo02 November 24 2009, 08:05:57 UTC

This was very sweet!

msemmaloo November 25 2009, 22:20:13 UTC

You always say the nicest things! Thank you so much for the encouraging comments, they're like little cookies!

aviv_b November 25 2009, 18:53:06 UTC

Very nice. I couldn't figure out what Jack was doing at first - actually I thought I couldn't figure out WHO Jack was doing at first, LOL.

I'll be putting up a little Thanksgiving crackfic tonight, and nice to see others getting into the holiday spirit!

msemmaloo November 25 2009, 22:19:03 UTC

"I couldn't figure out WHO Jack was doing at first, LOL."

Oh good, then that section worked! I was hoping readers would get the impression he was putting the moves on someone else! A little gotcha for the reader. (Actually, that was going to be the entire part of the story -- but I realized there was a lot more to it.) Can't wait to read what you post!

beesandbrews November 29 2009, 22:57:25 UTC

That was cute!