There's a First Time (for everything) - Once Upon a Time (1/1)

[msgenevieve]

Title: There's a First Time (for everything)
Fandom: Once Upon a Time
Genre: Smut, Fluff, UST
Characters: Emma Swan, Killian Jones/Captain Hook
Pairing: Emma/Hook
Rating: R
Summary: The first time she kisses him, it’s in Neverland. The second time she kisses him, it’s in New York. The third time she kisses him, it’s in Storybrooke. Every

Comments

[paynesgrey]

This was extremely hot and awesome. Brilliant job! Loved this!

[msgenevieve]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[wyldreamer]

This was really great! Loved it :)

[msgenevieve]

You are too kind, thank you! :)

[scribblecat]

It's the way you can take a simple back and forth of conversation and make it theirs only. I love that, especially the 'Jack of all trades/come again?' flowing to the '“You’re many things in my dreams, darling.” . Killian Jones to Captain Hook seamlessly without missing a beat of character. It's all very delicious, I just love it when you go heavy on dialogue.
And the stuff. Wow the stuff. That is some hot pirate porn there, and not one bodice ripped, well done.

Thanks so much for writing this and giving me some context to my drawing. It was fab and 500 points to Gryffindor for the thing you did with the neck there. Will always and forever love your work.
*hugs*

[msgenevieve]

Well, what can I say? You draw the thing (WHICH WAS AMAZING), then I write the thing. :) But it helps that you also like the way I write the thing, lol!

No bodice ripping this time around - maybe next time? Hee.

[nell65]

Oh the new fandom squee!

I love it. :-)

[msgenevieve]

It's good to be back, lol! :)

[alexia_drake]

“There’s a good girl.”
...all the while trying to forget that every time he touches her, the last thing she feels like being is a good girl.

That's what I'd think too. lol

His mouth twitches. “Are you actually admitting you’re impressed by me, Swan?”
She puffs out a derisive breath. “In your dreams, Jones.”
... “You’re many things in my dreams, darling.” She closes her eyes, her fingertips clawing into the smooth wooden deck as his lips brush a soft trail of heat and sensation along her jaw. “Shall I tell you about them?”

That made me smile, and I could very easily see the scene in my mind :)

Heat blazes darkly in his eyes, and she suspects her words have just sent Gentleman Jones on his way and invited Captain Hook to have his wicked way with her.

Nicely written.

Great story :D

[msgenevieve]

Oh, thank you so much for the lovely feedback! I always love it when a reader picks up on the parts that I really liked writing, so thank you very much!