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Oct 06, 2011 21:31

SERENDIPITY - CHAPTER SEVENTEEN

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sleeper6 October 10 2011, 21:47:07 UTC
FLUFFY GOODNESS!!!

And bye-bye, Noah!

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msluredin October 11 2011, 00:54:55 UTC
Fluff to replace the earlier angst lol
and yes enough of noah :)

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nancygrew October 11 2011, 04:53:55 UTC
Is it sad that I'm as happy about Noah being pwned as I am about Luke and Reid being so happy together?

Love Noah thinking that Luke was just gonna keep coming back and then realizing that he wasn't. Even the fact that Noah ended it by being so mean was fun because it just points out what a goof he is.

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msluredin October 12 2011, 01:50:40 UTC
Noah never changes and refused to do so. I'm glad you like it!
I hated that noah and Luke were in that constant soap struggle of being together, breaking up, then repeat for the rest of your life. Yay for Luke getting out of that hurtful cycle.

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donia23 October 12 2011, 08:24:56 UTC
i couldnot choose one specific scene to comment on the whole chapter is great

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msluredin October 14 2011, 01:26:38 UTC
Thanks! Make me happy that you liked it!

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drunkyluke October 12 2011, 21:23:05 UTC
bye noah. don't let the door hit you on the ass on the way out!!!!!! enough said...

there was not ONE thing wrong with this chapter!!! top sentence not included. cool hand luke and the godfather. great minds do think alike don't they? when reid said our home, the tears again! sigh.... so good, SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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msluredin October 14 2011, 01:28:34 UTC
and noah is gone!
Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it so much! Fate yet again ;)
I loved the "our home" comment. He's ready for so much now.

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