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Oct 06, 2011 21:33

SERENDIPITY - EPILOGUE

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chefgirl866 October 10 2011, 20:04:55 UTC
Simply beautiful. Very nice

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msluredin October 11 2011, 02:59:53 UTC
aww thanks for the lovely compliments! Thanks for reading!

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casaluna85 October 10 2011, 20:07:50 UTC
I loved everything from them being stuck in the elevator to sharing their first kiss and later their first night together.
I think it was amazing how you worked in parts from ATWT!
I was hoping that Jason & Katie would become a couple... so awesome that you had Anniw as Jason's daughter!
It was a wonderful story!! Makes me wanna watch the movie again.
Please tell me you're alreay working on your next story? :D

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msluredin October 11 2011, 03:11:08 UTC
Aww thanks sweetie! I'm so happy that you liked it!! :)
I needed someone I liked for Katie - no chris! lol Glad you liked how I worked Annie in, I didn't want her to die like on the show.
I've watched the movie 3x since June just for this lol but I love it and will probably watch it again soon!
Yes I am working on a second story. Thanks for your interest, helps me want to continue!! Thanks for reading!!

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sirenanne999 October 10 2011, 20:38:27 UTC

LOVED IT!!! The bits of canon that were thrown in just fit perfectly with the premise of the movie. The timing and the pace were so smooth...and the angst was just enough to make their reunion so moving. The movie was ok but I think your version was just perfect. Thank you! :D

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msluredin October 11 2011, 03:15:43 UTC
Aww thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story! :)
I'm glad you liked the pace (I worried that the end might have rushed) and just enough angst (I can't handle too much).
Thank you for reading!

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joann414 October 10 2011, 20:51:15 UTC
Great job. Loved the sparring between the two in the first parts before they actually got together. Their naturalness together was written so wonderfully, and you still let Reid be himself.( ass and all ) I love the movie, bit I agree with sirenanne, yours was much better. Thanks so much!

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msluredin October 11 2011, 03:21:53 UTC
Thank you! I love the movie also so your and sirenanne's comments mean alot! So happy that you liked it! I really wanted them to be IC and yet keep that natural connection they had. Yes, Reid can be an ass but that's one reason I adore him. Hope you enjoyed him as much as I had fun writing him.
Thanks for reading!

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hopperl October 10 2011, 21:47:18 UTC

This was fantastic! I never saw the movie, but loved this story. I loved that Reid was Luke's first everything. I loved the mix of AU and cannon! Noah was an ass as always, which is also awesome! Thanks so much for sharing! Have I mentioned how in love I am with the Big Bang! The artwork/banners were beautiful as well.

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msluredin October 11 2011, 03:25:37 UTC
I'm learning that alot of people haven't seen this movie, I love it!
It makes me happy that you enjoyed my story! I needed Reid to be Luke's first everything! Hopefully I didn't go too overboard with Noah.
I love the artwork, she did an amazing job!
Thank you so much for reading!

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