i wrote a song..wo0t!

[mspoisonapple]

so, i got really bored/inspirde by watching the rain and so you better not laugh at me... and yeah. please feel free to critize me tho...no laughing tho



The day I fell in love with the rain

The sky looked cold and gloomy
Pale gray with flecks of white
Neither of us had brought our jackets
When the clouds began to cry

So much filled up that moment
It all hung on just one string
It was the day we changed forever
The day I fell in love
With the rain

We jumped in all the puddles
And laughed the cold away
While the cold wet sheets of rain
Wrote the soundtrack of our day

It was the day we changed forever
And it would never be the same
The day we both crossed the unspoken line
The day I fell in love
With the rain

There was no time for contemplations
As your head dipped in toward mine
The touch was soft and subtle
As your hold kept me from the sky

It would never be the same again
We had crossed the fragile line
There would be no going back now
The day I fell in love
With the rain

Yeah, it was the day I feel in love,
With the rain

As we held each other tightly
And you hand slipped into mine
On the day I fell in love
With you

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