Five because that's the number of digits on one of my hands.

[mtfierce]

First, thanks everyone who helped fill out my survey. I am, of course, trying not to draw conclusions on what kinds of friends I make [grinning], or even what having consideration/respect means in the context of a presumed requited love that it's so important, but it did help me get out of the book-funk.

Second, yes, I did submit some games for

Comments

[gwyd]

I wouldn't say unpublishable; I'd say would need editing and revision to publish. The characters are solid and sections of it are excellent, but it would need tightening as the pacing is uneven. I suggest finishing, then deciding if you want a series of short stories or a novel, then rewriting with that in mind.

Seriously, I like a lot of it and I do think it haws potential in a Jim Butcher/Tanya huff kind of way. Hang in there.