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[muchtooarrogant]

LJ Idol, Week Thirteen

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[copyright1983]

One wonders sometimes what gets into people. Well written.

[muchtooarrogant]

I know. When I read the article, all I could think was, "That poor kid!"

Thanks for reading!

Dan

[jem0000000]

Wow, poor guy.

This is very well-written; it flows beautifully, as usual, and I like the reoccurring element of "run" and running. It really ties the piece together.

Great job. *smile*

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you, I'm glad you like where I went with the article. I knew when I read the story that I had to write about it, but the whole thing was so sad to me that I wasn't sure how to approach it at first. I don't know whether this story does Enrique's memory justice, but I hope so.

Thanks again!

Dan

[theafaye]

How scary.

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you. I appreciate your reading and leaving a comment.

Dan

[sarcasmoqueen]

Poor kid. That must have been really scary for him.

Well written, Dan, nice job.

[muchtooarrogant]

Yes, I imagine it was terrifying. To have escaped the wreck, only to be gunned down by some crazed idiot.

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

Dan

[lawchicky]

Ack! This was chilling- how scary!

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you! It felt very scary when I read the story, and thought about that poor kid.

Thanks for reading and letting me know you were here. :)

Dan