Benefactio

[muchtooarrogant]

Timed writing challenge for worldofscribble

Challenge A: Write for sixty minutes, including the phrase "Are we just sinking in an ocean of faces" somewhere in your piece.

I had just turned fifteen on the day I almost drowned.

Comments

[rebelheart]

Well done, Dan.

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you!

LOL I enjoy the timed challenges, but they frustrate me too, as there's always so much more detail I want to put in.

Dan

[muchtooarrogant]

Well, we're even, because I voted against Benefactio to vote for yours. LOL Now, we just need some other people to chip in and break the tie. :)

Thank you, since I was dealing with such a limited time, I decided to make the descriptions as vivid as I possibly could. I actually had a lot more planned for the main character, I just didn't have the time. *sigh*

Dan

[muchtooarrogant]

"I guess they're called 'challenges' for a reason though!"

True, that. Still, give it a shot, you might surprise yourself. I definitely did.

Dan

[masteroth]

Interesting, pretty surreal!

[muchtooarrogant]

Thanks for reading. Yes, I wanted it to have an other-worldly feel, since I knew I wouldn't have too much time to flesh things out. Hope you enjoyed.

Dan

[masteroth]

I did. :-)