Whispers

Jan 19, 2013 11:47

A poetry exercise for worldofscribble. Write a Tanka.

Leaves fall between us,
Cover, a slow obscuring.
So many secrets,
Mocking whispers, will they tell?
Once part of us, but no more.

Author's Note: I'm not sure why, but I've had trees on the mind lately. Plus, I'm currently reading ShoÌ„gun by James Clavell, so the Japanese poetry seemed to fit right in ( Read more... )

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becki_lee January 22 2013, 17:17:38 UTC
I like this :)

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muchtooarrogant January 22 2013, 17:27:38 UTC
Thank you!

Dan

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