Discovering Chapter Twelve: Part Four of Four

Apr 28, 2008 01:56

Still reading huh?

Wow...thank you! I am not worthy.

Discovering Chapter Twelve: Part Four )

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yessi_5 April 28 2008, 17:28:35 UTC
I want to have kidlets with this fic. Like, dozens of them.

I'd say this was definitely worth the wait, if I weren't too anxious that it might encourage you to wait just as long with the next chapter ;-)

No, but seriously, if I had to, I'd wait til my own retirement to see this story finished. You broke my heart countless times in this chapter, but most of all with the idea of Ryan being a affectionate, curious, upbeat and Seth-like kid until the shooting. I still strongly suspect that it wasn't Trey who actually held the gun, but like Sandy I feel that I'm definitely missing something.

Loved especially Summer hugging Sandy and Ryan's "Hi(gh)" conversation.

You seriously rock and made my day today!

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muchtvsocfic April 29 2008, 01:40:36 UTC
Thanks Yessi!!!!

I need to make updates more often, but I appreciate you understanding the wait.

You guys taking the time to leave me comments... rocks.

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malinr April 28 2008, 17:54:14 UTC
"Still reading huh?" Yep and loving every second of it. You write Sandy so convincing. This is how a dad would "act". Hugs

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muchtvsocfic April 29 2008, 01:41:24 UTC
Sandy is the best dad ever.

:o)

(When he isn't working 24/7 or having an almost affair.)

lol

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60schic April 28 2008, 21:00:29 UTC
*gasps*

So, I can see that Sandy needed someone he didn't need to lie to, and someone who could run interference with Seth, so I begrudgingly give you letting Summer in to see Ryan, as long as she doesn't get all the confidential info.

I'm not so much thinking about what Sandy will do once he connects the dots...I'm wondering how much more story and worry and angst there is going to be before we find out how Sandy connects the dots! I foresee many many many more chapters in your future, oh wise and wonderful much!!

(I'm thinking you ought to just tell us the story verbally when we see you this summer....)

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muchtvsocfic April 29 2008, 01:45:27 UTC
Summer won't find out about the shooting....probably. hee

It's gonna definitely be a few more chapters. I still have two days to go before K and S even get back into town, Let's see....should be another three years.

Thanks for all the wonderful feedback!

:o)

And no way am I spilling this summer. bwaaahaahaaa

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60schic April 29 2008, 02:27:55 UTC
You're so mean! By the time we get Ryan healed (and I'm counting on you to do that *gives evil eye*) Ben will be a grandfather!!!!

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muchtvsocfic April 29 2008, 02:33:11 UTC
no....

he'll be a HOTT!grandfather!!!!!!!!!!

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alluxera April 28 2008, 21:04:14 UTC
Oh my god, this story is so good. I read this from the beginning and was patiently waiting (lurking) for updates,and this was so worth waiting. I like it that you don't rush through the events, slowly developing the plots, because this is so dramatic and heartbreaking. Thank you for allowing me to read.

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muchtvsocfic April 29 2008, 01:47:03 UTC
awww. thanks so much for the lovely comments alluxera.

Lurkers are welcomed with open arms in the snowglobe....I appreciate you letting me know you are reading and enjoying the story.

And I'm glad the pacing is working for you. Sometimes I worry it is too slow and thus boring.

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jillbee7 April 28 2008, 21:24:35 UTC
That was spectacular. Thank you so much.

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muchtvsocfic April 29 2008, 01:48:00 UTC
Thanks! jillbee.

I love your icon so much.

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jillbee7 April 29 2008, 03:20:57 UTC
Hahaha! Thank you! So do I.

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