Future One-Shot

May 26, 2008 10:50



Ryan and Taylor’s first child only lives seven hours.

They name her Lily.

Ryan’s not religious. Never has been.

Ignoring the words being said, he closes his eyes and turns his head as they all stand beside the incubator, listening to a random priest deliver last rights.

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He skipped Marissa’s funeral, but he ( Read more... )

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shouldsleep May 26 2008, 16:28:34 UTC
This was sad but very sweet as well. It seems totally in character that Ryan would try and be strong for Taylor despite his own devastation. Thank you for this.

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muchtvsocfic May 28 2008, 03:10:38 UTC
Thanks for reading shouldsleep...and especially for taking the time to comment.

:o)

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mel39 May 26 2008, 18:18:31 UTC
Sad but lovely. I just don't know why these bad things have to keep happening to him.

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muchtvsocfic May 28 2008, 03:11:25 UTC
They happen to him because he is,,,,Ryan Atwood,,,,,harbinger of doom.

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alluxera May 26 2008, 18:34:18 UTC
I think the muses are wide awake.
Very sad and emotional and don't worry about a possible coincidence, these stories are very different and very brilliant. Thank you for sharing and posting.

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muchtvsocfic May 28 2008, 03:11:56 UTC
And thanks for taking the time to comment alluxera!

:o)

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mirella67 May 26 2008, 19:00:58 UTC
I'm always happy when your muses stir. Such a sad, sweet story.

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muchtvsocfic May 28 2008, 03:12:22 UTC
*waves to mirella*

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chazper May 26 2008, 19:26:18 UTC
Having watched a friend survive the loss of her first child--a son who lived about, yes, seven hours--every word of this feels ripped straight from real life: that raw and that true.

My friend now has a daughter. Fictional or not, I hope your Ryan is ready to risk himself and try again soon. And maybe you could write that story?

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muchtvsocfic May 28 2008, 03:13:35 UTC
Chaz!

I'm glad you friend has found some peace.

I think you might be right...an follow-up story is a good idea.

Want to write it? lol

Just 1000 words.

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