Okay, so just a couple of days ago, I was recommending this in the fic recs forum as one of my very favorite Season 3 stories (never mind that it's one of my all-time favorite stories, period), and not coincidentally, I was thinking to myself, "Self, much hasn't updated in a very long time, and I so hope she'll update sometime soon." And lo and behold, not long after, willwork4dean tells me there's an update (never mind that she spotted it first despite the fact that I check for your updates multiple times a day--humph)! I must be psychic!
So, EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! It's back! This story continues to be incredibly compelling. Just as Ryan is starting to get better, the mystery plot continues to thicken.
As always, I adore the Sandy POV; his love for and understanding of Ryan is a thing of beauty. I particularly enjoyed his exchange with Theresa and their mutual understanding of what makes Ryan tick. You so nail that whole aspect of his personality both in your own universe, and I think in canon. Awesome, awesome work.
Every sentence, every word has me on the edge of my seat. All the details, all the pain and worry and relief you've written makes this story seem so real. Theresa's call (having the baby in the background was a nice touch) and Ryan's dream are really building up the suspense. Thanks for the amazing update.
Listen, let me write you a quick one-shot in thanks for all your support.
Just tell me the plot and I will custom it to what you want. It'll be short, so I can get it done in one sitting....but hopefully it will put a smile on your face.
*sigh* I told the husband I had to finish up for just a moment, but couldn't stop reading until I read both ch. 13 & 14. The chapters are still so full of pain, confusion, lies & deception. You've created a heavy scene here that just sits with me. I keep wondering about who really shot Ryan, and how Kirsten and Seth will react to Ryan and of course, will Ryan recover or will more just keep beating him down.
Jeez...I had almost forgotten about the gunshot side story. As happy as I am that Ryan is 'improving', I don't like the idea of more surgery, or pneumonia, or septicemia. And I am still waiting for the shit to hit the fan when the missus gets home and finds out she's been lied to.
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So, EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! It's back! This story continues to be incredibly compelling. Just as Ryan is starting to get better, the mystery plot continues to thicken.
As always, I adore the Sandy POV; his love for and understanding of Ryan is a thing of beauty. I particularly enjoyed his exchange with Theresa and their mutual understanding of what makes Ryan tick. You so nail that whole aspect of his personality both in your own universe, and I think in canon. Awesome, awesome work.
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i don't deserve my loyal readers.
i always try to stay true to canon, even when i play with it, so i truly do appreciate that you think i keep the characters...in character.
THANKS! for the rec. You're sweet.
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Theresa's call (having the baby in the background was a nice touch) and Ryan's dream are really building up the suspense.
Thanks for the amazing update.
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My most bestest nudger. Hope you are well.
Listen, let me write you a quick one-shot in thanks for all your support.
Just tell me the plot and I will custom it to what you want. It'll be short, so I can get it done in one sitting....but hopefully it will put a smile on your face.
e-mail me
vegasedj@yahoo.com
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The chapters are still so full of pain, confusion, lies & deception. You've created a heavy scene here that just sits with me. I keep wondering about who really shot Ryan, and how Kirsten and Seth will react to Ryan and of course, will Ryan recover or will more just keep beating him down.
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FAMOUS! how are you.
I never see my friends anymore.
School is kicking my a**.
Same with you?
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BUT....Ryan is improving---YAYS!
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had to sneak the gunshot in. there's a lot more on it next chapter.
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