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Jun 29, 2005 00:42

as the rain drops ( Read more... )

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*hugs* lettebedown June 29 2005, 20:36:36 UTC

Two souls lost and found,

Complete, but empty....

still lost and found....

*hugs* Thats my lame attempt at a deep response....

Aprill

Re: *hugs* muckrucker June 30 2005, 03:02:14 UTC

heh, it was more of a stream of thought than anything

but the attempt is appreciated lol

Good stuff... csukat July 1 2005, 01:56:11 UTC

Hey Steve, good stuff man.

There's a great website for poetry....

www.everypoet.com

You can post your own stuff and get positive criticism for it. It's a pretty cool place go check it out, and keep writing man..

-eddie

My insight... swoosh16 July 1 2005, 15:43:04 UTC

*clears throat*

*sings*
Rain drops are fallin' on my head.
But that doesn't mean my eyes will soon be turnin' red!
*end singing*

But seriously, great poem... another one to add to the wall of fame for SGM.

thanks guys! muckrucker July 4 2005, 05:06:47 UTC

I'll prolly be writing a lot coming up, since I'll be moving and all... hopefully it'll also turn out as well

wow... lettebedown July 20 2005, 22:45:13 UTC

listening to your guitar things on the computer, HOW F***Ing awesome are you lOl

Totally impressed :)

Aprill