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[muffinsaresexi]

Comments

[pplequalshit]

That's really good! *Claps*

[breakmeheart]

pshh if it where sucky i wouldent be reading it! well already read it. lol

[uncut_version]

It's awesome. Some parts don't really go to the flow of the poem. The concept is great. But yeah, it needs a little work.

Heh, just being honest 'cause I know you'd be with me.
Love ya, hun.

[popping_corn]

very creative.
great choice of words.
like it.
but why are you so low?
<3.