sailing away.

Feb 23, 2006 23:23

Finished the whole thing this time. Enjoy. I'll title it later on. But for now we'll know it as Delusions in White

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chemreaction February 24 2006, 16:50:19 UTC
i am curious as to why you seperated them.
& you are outstanding at creating imagery. i also like the spacing you have used. hell, i really like this whole thing.

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muffledvelvet February 24 2006, 16:54:26 UTC

I seperated the different scenes. I wanted there to be a clear distinction that the first scene wasn't bleeding into the second one, because there had been time that had elapsed inbetween them. Kinda like a curtain drawing open and shut.

and thank you. I think I've found that imagery is getting easier and easier for me to create. but harder and harder for me to be satisfied with, so when I do create it, it's better than before.

glad you enjoyed it. took a bit out of me writing it.

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mirrorofthedead February 25 2006, 03:03:33 UTC
I cannot find words to tell you how absolutely amazing this is.
I am in awe of your work, this was incredible.

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muffledvelvet February 25 2006, 07:42:46 UTC
that right there, that was good enough to make me feel like it was worth it. I'm totally drained now. Work, that, and then work gathering have me killed.

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